I like this story's premise, but it is also very strange to me.
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I like the start, where a character has a crush on someone, and gets a temporary job by their recommendation. Two birds, one stone. Nice!
Then their relationship escalates very quickly, and then the taste testing caused a transformation on the main character.
Having the choice for the transformation is nice, and the strawberry bear design is cute, but it is so strange. Particularly the cartoon transformation. Turning into a cartoon character and having cartoon powers switched the mood so hard. The blanket transformation was the one that kept the mood the most, and added extra story, so it's the one I liked the most.
The transformation stuff seems a bit tacked on since it's not really resolved. The rest of the story is fun to read through. I liked the way Wes rambled to himself.^^
There's that turn of phrase where you tack on the double negatives formally incorrectly.
How could I not tell him no? How could I not turn down an offer like this? How could I seriously NOT pass this up?
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I like this story's premise, but it is also very strange to me.
SPOILERS
I like the start, where a character has a crush on someone, and gets a temporary job by their recommendation. Two birds, one stone. Nice!
Then their relationship escalates very quickly, and then the taste testing caused a transformation on the main character.
Having the choice for the transformation is nice, and the strawberry bear design is cute, but it is so strange. Particularly the cartoon transformation. Turning into a cartoon character and having cartoon powers switched the mood so hard. The blanket transformation was the one that kept the mood the most, and added extra story, so it's the one I liked the most.
All in all, an interesting read.
The strawbearry was so cute!!!
The transformation stuff seems a bit tacked on since it's not really resolved. The rest of the story is fun to read through. I liked the way Wes rambled to himself.^^
There's that turn of phrase where you tack on the double negatives formally incorrectly.
How could I not tell him no?
But you got it right the fourth time.^^How could I not turn down an offer like this?
How could I seriously NOT pass this up?
Thank you so much for reading!